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Post by bringerofchaos on Dec 29, 2007 15:42:02 GMT
excellent, i shall include this in silenced warrior, only chapter 1... yet
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Post by elfham on Dec 29, 2007 16:28:57 GMT
There, that looks much better! Don't take my comments negatively, I'm not trying to run you down or anything.. Keep it up, I want to see where you're taking this story. Cheers, -mike
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Post by Warlord of Morgul on Dec 29, 2007 19:19:15 GMT
[glow=green,2,300]It does look easier to read doesn't it?.... [/glow]
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Post by Red Corsairs on Dec 29, 2007 19:29:23 GMT
Yeah its easier to read when its not in that silly green glow
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Post by Warlord of Morgul on Dec 29, 2007 19:36:15 GMT
[glow=green,2,300]Don't dis the Morgul glow man! [/glow]
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Post by Red Corsairs on Dec 29, 2007 20:41:18 GMT
okay , although it does get a little annoying , whos with me
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Post by Warlord of Morgul on Dec 30, 2007 20:10:15 GMT
[glow=green,2,300]No-one by the looks of it..........[/glow]
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Post by Red Corsairs on Dec 30, 2007 20:12:55 GMT
no... just nobody had a look at this thread yet . Ahh well, its not that bad, just trying to wind you up . I think it worked . I'll shut up now
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Post by bringerofchaos on Dec 31, 2007 10:51:26 GMT
its in SW issue 1... i like it personallly
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Post by Warlord of Morgul on Dec 31, 2007 19:07:19 GMT
[glow=green,2,300]Thank you BoC When can I read issue 1?[/glow]
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Post by bringerofchaos on Dec 31, 2007 19:51:37 GMT
new year's day
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Post by Red Corsairs on Jan 1, 2008 14:22:46 GMT
Now . Its good ;D
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Post by Warlord of Morgul on Jan 3, 2008 19:49:30 GMT
Gosh I better start writing shouldn't I? Chapter 3 Hurian slowed his horse to a halt at the side of the road. Boromir slowed beside him. "We shall rest here tonight." After the pair had set up camp, Hurian sat under a tree with his pipe, and reflected on the events of the past few days. He had been dragged from Denethor's court and thrown into a cell. A few days later he was told that he was to be escorted to the borders of Gondor by Boromir himself! As he was being escorted to the stables to choose a horse, he was allowed to gaze upon the White Tree of Gondor, the symbol of his beloved country one last time. Under that tree in the wild, he swam in his thoughts for well over an hour before he fell asleep. As he slept he dreamed: The first imiage was very clear, a large snarling wolf-like creature with yellowing fangs and mattered fur. After that the images gradually more and more blurred, a tall man with a shining spear apon a rearing horse. Flame rising from the tainted ground. The brilliant flash of lightning lighting up a crude blade. A flying shadow. A lady in white with golden hair. A man who's sword flashed like the blades of old. And finally a huge black bloated shape swaying towards him... He woke gasping, and looked around. He saw only blackness. The next morning Boromir and Hurian stopped next to a rocky outcrop that marked the end of the borders of Gondor and the start of Rohan, home of the Horse-Lords. Finally Boromir spoke: "This is where I leave you you may find refugee in Rohan or you may find hostility. Where you go however is no longer my concern. You may not reenter Gondor if you value your life, for you shall be killed. Farewell." As he turned his horse north, towards the Misty Mountains and beyond, a huge shape lept over the outcrop. It was an orc, clad in leather and stinking skins. Hurian, however was more intrested in the wofl-like creature the orc was sitting on. It resembled the exact same creature he had seen in his dream.
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Post by Red Corsairs on Jan 3, 2008 20:03:17 GMT
looks good, is that WIP?
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Post by Warlord of Morgul on Jan 8, 2008 23:36:15 GMT
Look, an UPDATE!
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