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Post by Ryuzaki on Jan 21, 2008 2:37:44 GMT
Chapter 4 Kig was running as fast as i could toward Moria 'I have to tell Durburz about his plan to take back Moria' he thought as he ran. * "That traitor, that swine, that evil little backstaping lout" yelled Nimgeg at no one in particular. "calm down Nimgeg," said Bizog, "I't doesn't matter if Durburz knows, whats he going to do raise his defenses. He thinks were just a bunch of misfits and fears nothing of us." "Whats that" Zurgob said as he pointed into the distance. "It's a surviving dwarf of the band we just defeated, Nimgeg, kill him" snarled Bizog. The dwarf was roughly one hundred and fifty meters away, yet Nimgeg brought it down with a single arrow. "Good one Nimgeg," laughed Bizog, "he thought he might live, d**n idiot. Well back to buisnes, we need to take the hold of kelbar to make a strategic point for us to fall back in dire need." Bizog then pulled out a map, he traced his finger along in several directions. "This is Moria here and Kelbars hold is here, Burin has a hold here and here, they both need ot be eradicated before the full assult on moria can begin. Over here is a forest that is much like mirkwood, I hope to capture spiders there and wargs here," pointing to yet another place. "Now, if Kelbar and his men manage to drive us back, we need to take refuge in the forest down here, till w can renew our strenght. If i die during this all, nimgeg takes as comand and if he dies then," He quickly glanced at Zurgob, "well lets not get to far ahead. [glow=yellow,2,300]Yes i know this was a very short chapter and was realy quick to write [/glow] [glow=yellow,2,300]I dedicate this one to Kain and Madmat for making this great site (you did make it right?)[/glow]
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Post by Ryuzaki on Jan 21, 2008 18:18:17 GMT
[glow=yellow,2,300]jeez im realy in the writing mood now,[/glow] Chapter 5. "You have to let me in" Kig cried to the goblin guarding the eastgate, "It's urgent, i have to tell the king!" * Bizog and his army were walking at a steady pace throughout the next week, ocasionaly incountering small bands of roaming dwarves. They waled all the way to the forest that Bizog had pointed out on the map. There they encountered many spiders and captured almost all of them. "Why do we need the spiders?" Zurgob asked, "won't they turn on us?" "They might, but thats why we release them into the caves to cause panick in the city." Bizog mumbled as if his mind was drifting of somewhere else. He thinking about Moria, the long dark halls, the deep secluded caverns. Maybe i shoudn't have left, He thought, Maybe i should have stayed, Im only a goblin its natural to be treated that way. No, leaving was for the best, he would make Moria stronger when he returned, stronger, bigger and better. Then eventualy him or his children or his childrens children would take over all of middle earth, maybe even overthrow the great Sauron one day. A goblin named Gignar brought him out of his thoughts, "Look isn't that Kelbars hold there!" He pointed as he shouted. Gignar was no warrior, he was only with them for his strange ability to comunicate with wargs. "Yes that is," Bizog snickered. The dwarfs time is coming to an end, he thought, and it is us that shall shake there fortifications and drive them from there mountains, and you Kelbar, will be the first. [glow=yellow,2,300]Dedicated to Eomer of Rohan, cuz i wanna[/glow]
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Post by Kelbar on Jan 22, 2008 1:14:35 GMT
Oooh. I feel an epic battle a brewin. Just make sure I don't go down too easily.
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Post by Ryuzaki on Jan 22, 2008 2:01:10 GMT
lol yah np chapter 6 coming soon to all TLOTR and FOME forums
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Post by Ryuzaki on Jan 27, 2008 20:09:46 GMT
Here is chapter six, a short one but it focuses only on kig and durburz, to help you get a fel for the personality i picture in him BTW red, thanks for the editing offer but i think i do not need it any more chapter 6 Kig bowed to the goblin king, "they are moving north to destroy the dwarves! Then they are coming back to over throw you great one." "You believe i fear from them! ha you are a fool Kig. i should kill you here and now, for deserting, and killing a fellow goblin warrior. You are the one who killed Firgob are you not."Durburz sneered at him. "ye, yes i did. I figured that if he were to die Bizog would have less of a chance of planning the perfect strategy to defeat you. You know how good that goblins smell was, he could not only tell what, he could tell, how far and how many. Besides he was going to die anyways, from that arrow, i just finished the job." Kig stutered. "yes, yes, Hegar was always like that... with a faster reaction time then any other dwarf." Durburz remembered outloud, "when i killed his father and his brothers i should have killed him to." [glow=yellow,2,300]Ohh kinds ties things back doesn't it, well im dedicating this chapter to me. [/glow]
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Post by Red Corsairs on Jan 28, 2008 4:42:26 GMT
It's really begining to shape now! The stories great so far durburz!! Kepp it up
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Post by Ryuzaki on Jan 30, 2008 20:06:18 GMT
chapter 7 Kig looked down at a new army of goblins under his control, he smiled but then frowned for he had developed a firm bond with two of the other goblins in Bizogs army. 'No' he thought, goblins don't make bonds, they were simple aquantices to help him gather trust. But even as he wen't to sleep that night he was still contemplating, 'was it the right thing'. * Kelbars fortres has not a cave like many of the dwarfs, but a long wall surrounding a citadel, much like isengard, but smaller. At several points along the wall there are towers jutting up, with the douple trebuchet of the dwarfs on top of each one. The tops of the walls were wide enough for five dwarves to walk shoulder to shoulder to shoulder. "Bizog, the fortres is strangely empty looking," Zurgob pointed out, "Maybe there is nobody there." "Just as I thought," Nimgeg said, "The dwarves have all ran away from us" "No that is not it, the dwarves are smarter than that, they know that if we attacked we would substain heavy damage and perhaps cause mayhem among us." snickered Bizog, "I would not hve led us here if I had thought there would be a large force occupying this hold. Besides if they had run they would have left a small garison to guard here anyways." Just then three small goblins ran up to Bizog. "what is it?" he asked. "Great one, the scouts have returned." said one of the goblins. "Good, did they see anything?" Bizog inquired, for the first time all day it seemed like he was paying attention. "They have only reported about seeing twelve dwarves, a halfling and a wizard." said another of the three goblins. "Where, where did they see them." "Up in the mountains to the north, they said one of the dwarves was realy fat." The last one said. "Okay take no notice of them," Bizog said, now he grinning, "and give those scouts something to eat." "Why you so happy." Zurgob asked. "Because i know how the dwarves will act now." Bizog smirked [glow=yellow,2,300]gosh umm dedicated to uhhhh man im running out of people to Gir[/glow]
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Post by Eomer on Jan 31, 2008 6:38:26 GMT
It's cool how you put a bit of the Hobbit in there. I then lniks it more to LoTR.
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Post by Red Corsairs on Jan 31, 2008 18:56:39 GMT
Man, can't wait for more! Great work again dur! Keep up the good work
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Post by Kelbar on Feb 1, 2008 1:15:49 GMT
Looking Good dur. Good Luck with more
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Post by Ryuzaki on Feb 1, 2008 1:31:48 GMT
chapter 8
"Go" Kig cried at the sniveling goblin at his feet, "tell Bizogs army that we shall fight on the peaks of Caradras. Tell him to come and face us if he is brave enough." Once The other goblin was gone he said to himself, "or if you are fool enough"
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Bizogs army walked slowely up to the hold of Burin. "who is this Burin anyway" Nimgeg asked.
"He is an indirect desendant of Durins Line, i beleive he was a descendant of Dains great grandfather." Zurgob ansered.
"Wow Zurgob, you dumb old half troll, you actualy knew something"
"He is responsible for sacking the great cave of Gunger, the home of my ancestry and kinsfolk." He ansered solemly. "I shall kill him with my bare hands if i have to."
"Patience, Zurgob, there will be time for that later, look" Bizog pointed off into the distance. A pack of wild wargs was charging in on them, just then it seperated and split of leaving two charging straight at them.
"Ill handle those two," Zurgob said. He looked to Bizog for reasurance, a slight nod told him to go for it. The two wargs were closing in, one right behind the other. Bizog took his giant axe of his back and just as the warg was jumping, he turned. He turrned at such a speed and with such agility that you would never expect from a creature of his size. He spun once around to gather momentum and slamed the axe into the side of the wargs head, spliting it open showering a goblin beside him in blood. As the other warg ran up he slamed his blade deep into its skull, and it deden't just leve a mark it sliced straight through. We weeled to face the other direction as another warg prowled up behind him. Suddenly a howl spilit the air and a gigantic warg stepped up, but the warg did not look ready to attack.
"Nimgeg," Bizog demanded, "get Gignar to come over here, NOW"
[glow=yellow,2,300]deicated to WoM[/glow]
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Post by Ryuzaki on Feb 6, 2008 23:08:10 GMT
Chapter 9
The gigantic warg stood there motionless for a whole minute, then he snarled and five other wargs steped up.
"Ill take these ones as well," Zurgob murmered. The wargs stood there for a while attempting to stare down the one who killed there comrades. Suddenly three of them ran forward, Zurgob swept his ax around twice, killing two before the first one even realised it. But his speed was his undoing, the third warg jumped up knocking zurgob to the ground and flinging the ax from his hands. The other two rushed towards him, but now his speed saved him, he bent his legs up to his chest and as the wargs lept he flipped one right onto its back, winding it. The last warg lept forward, but Zurgob did not have time to get in to the position to flip it. Instead he bent his legs into a more spring-like pose, thrusting them forward plastering the beast in the face, possibly breaking its skull. He kept his momentum going using the strength in his legs to flip himself up. But Zurgob still had a weakness that the warg that was winded took advantage of, stupidity. Zurgob believed the warg to be dead and did not turn around to face it.
"Zurgob!" Nimgeg cried, "Behind you" Zurgob turned his head around in what felt likes hours he saw the muscles in the wargs legs tighten. He saw them tense up, he saw the slober dripping from its mouth, ready to eat. It pounced.
[glow=yellow,2,300]Dedicated to GW, even though they are to expencive[/glow]
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Post by Kelbar on Feb 7, 2008 3:44:41 GMT
Nice!
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Post by Red Corsairs on Feb 8, 2008 18:33:42 GMT
Good chapter... not too sure why anyone would dedicate it to GW though ... jk
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Post by Ryuzaki on Mar 3, 2008 3:38:59 GMT
This chapter is a flashback to Bizogs early life.
Chapter ten
Bizog stood there watching in awe at the trial taking place. He wondered why all of this was happening to him, not somebody else. The young goblin watch as his dad was onesidedly abused by the court of law. The young second prince name was said snapping Bizog into atention. "First prince gorg, youre son has been raised in secret for five years. Even kept a secret from your father and his grandfather, Durburz the king, is this true?"
"Yes" Bizogs father said, "I have. Only because i feared an attack on his life, and the end of the line of kings."
Durburz voice rang out above his, cutting him off, "High treason!" He lept of the podium and swumg his massive serrated sword hewing the head of his own son. Bizog screamed and rushed to his fallen fathers side. "Ha ha ha" The king laughed, "It looks like the little first prince is sad about the death of his poor daddy. Well, he will have lots to scream about when i am done with him." [glow=yellow,2,300] Dedicated to all the users with 1, 2 or 0 posts[/glow]
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