Ryuzaki
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Post by Ryuzaki on Jan 2, 2008 21:29:10 GMT
K i have been thinking about this and i decided to write a story about a band of goblins that break of the comand of Durburz and start an army of there own to attempt at overthroughing Durburz. so here is a kind of summary. Durburz cheif strategist, the cleverest of goblins, dislikes the way Durburz commands the army. Him and his closest partners, a half-troll(not a Harad one but an honest to god half troll) and an extremely skilled archer, followed by there regiment of warriors leave Durburz to build an army. While gone from Moria they recrute beasts of all manners, and fight against the household of Dahl the Dwarf. eventualy traving back to Moria to face of with the king and his Army of millions or pehrhaps tens of millions of goblins. So i need help with names (mostly goblins) and a bit of help on locations. I hope to make a great story with the help of all my fellow gamers.
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Red Corsairs
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Post by Red Corsairs on Jan 2, 2008 21:30:37 GMT
what would you like me to help with? Im sure i could help you out some
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Post by Ryuzaki on Jan 2, 2008 21:35:32 GMT
like i said goblin and dwarf names and possible locations for battles
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Post by Red Corsairs on Jan 2, 2008 21:42:14 GMT
im sure i could gather a few goblin and dwarf names, ill update with a list of goblin and dwarf names tommorow sometime
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Post by Ryuzaki on Jan 2, 2008 21:43:48 GMT
ok ty
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Post by Warlord of Morgul on Jan 3, 2008 19:33:52 GMT
[glow=green,2,300]I would love to help but im busy writing my story at the moment. Good luck![/glow]
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Post by Red Corsairs on Jan 3, 2008 19:49:01 GMT
Here are some goblin names i've done so far: Bizog Firgog Zurgob Bizgag Nimgig Azeg Ezog Izag Exactly just how many goblin/dwarven names do you need? Hope thats ok for now
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Post by Ryuzaki on Jan 3, 2008 20:07:55 GMT
there perfect omg ;D! that should be good for the goblin names, i need a name for a dwarf king , thats it. oh and a sutable name for a warg theiftan, i was thinking either woof, bark, snoop, or long howling noise . A name for a dwarf hold would be needed, for this one i was thinking Dingar
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Post by Red Corsairs on Jan 3, 2008 20:18:55 GMT
Well for the dwarf king... Burin and for the Warg chieftain how about ... Grawp Hope thats ok
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Post by Ryuzaki on Jan 3, 2008 20:20:30 GMT
[glow=yellow,2,300]its great , should get chapter 1 up tomorow. [/glow]
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Post by Red Corsairs on Jan 3, 2008 20:28:07 GMT
Nice to here
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Post by Ryuzaki on Jan 3, 2008 20:31:00 GMT
Note* for simplicity, all other languages have been translated to English
[glow=red,2,300][shadow=blue,left,300]Prolouge[/shadow][/glow]
[glow=yellow,1,300]The great goblin king Durburz sat in his throne room contemplating the recent dwarf attacks on his kingdom, Moria. "Great one, Bizog is here" his royal advisor said, but his voice was muffled because he bowed so low that his face was pressed against the floor.
"Good send him in!" demanded Durburz. The great door to his throne room creaked open slowly and three figures steped in. "Good, and i see you brought your...".
"Advisors" said Bizog, the goblin standing in the middle, "this is Zurbog" indicating to the huge half troll on his left, "and this is Nemgig", indicating to the small goblin on his right.
"... I see" mumbled Durburz under his breath, "well now i need you to plot a strategy to attack the nearby Dwarf hold of dingar".
"Very well great one," he said. As they walked out the hulking brute, Zurgob, asked in his regular, idoitic, toneless voice "what are you doing?"
Which earned the short replay, "We are leaving."[/glow]
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Post by Red Corsairs on Jan 3, 2008 20:37:54 GMT
All good apart from this one part Durburz said:Okay... do you think goblins would really talk like that?... Just a small thing to change
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Post by Ryuzaki on Jan 3, 2008 20:39:32 GMT
[glow=yellow,2,300][shadow=red,left,300]k how about now[/shadow][/glow]
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Post by Red Corsairs on Jan 3, 2008 20:54:53 GMT
Well sorry to be a pain but i dont think they would call each other things like 'royal advisor' ... being goblins and all, no offense . I Figured it something like... Prolouge The great goblin king Durburz sat in his throne room contemplating the recent dwarf attacks on his kingdom, Moria. "Master, Bizog is here" said one of his brutish advisors, but his voice was muffled because he bowed so low that his face was pressed against the floor. "Good send him in!" demanded Durburz. The great door to his throne room creaked open slowly and three figures steped in. "Good, and i see you brought your...". "Advisors" said Bizog, the goblin standing in the middle, "This is Zurbog", he said indicating to the huge half troll on his left, "and this is Nemgig", indicating to the small goblin on his right. "... I see" mumbled Durburz under his breath, "well, now i want you to plot a strategy to attack the nearby Dwarf hold of Dingar". "Very well Master," he said. As they walked out the hulking brute, Zurgob, asked in his regular, idoitic, toneless voice "what are you doing?" Which earned the short replay, "We are leaving." ______________________________________________ Thats more how I imagined goblins to talk. Not much of a difference but it makes them sound more like goblins. I would be delighted to take the role of 'editor' for your stories . Its up to you of course.
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